22-08-2012, 05:58 PM
The way the attributes and needs of your characters are being presented, high and clear, colourful descriptions, speak very clearly of your skill as an author. These things, the description of objects/emotions/fears/character's needs, is just what a fantasy author needs to make a work worth reading. I salute you, and wish you good luck. Not good luck writing, I do not believe you need that, but good luck becomming noticed. This holds crystal-clear potential, the way you write, the way you grab a hold on your story, as if you can smell, taste and hear the world that you are describing when you write. Not just imagine the words.
As I said, true potential.
As I said, true potential.