[Submission] Great Calradic Halls (Updated!)

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In the second image, it's pretty obvious that you're using the same rubble prop repeatedly. It gives the map a very artificial feel.

You should consider how each prop is significant to the scene. Why would it logically be where it is? How was it used? What is the history behind it, and how does it connect to the backstory?

Is there a reason for the suit of armor in picture 2? The hall is supposed to support a barracks, so there should be more places for soldiers to eat. Then again, the hall hasn't been in use, and clearly the rubble has not been fully removed, so it is doubtful that soldiers would actually be using the hall at this time. There shouldn't be much food on the tables aside from a pot of soup or barrel of beer for the small (or big) team of excavators. Since the hall has fallen into disuse, should the fountain still have water? Should the plants still be alive? Or perhaps plant life has taken over the hall wherever sunlight can reach. These are just a few things that come to mind when I ask myself these questions while looking at your screenshots and reading the backstory.

Anyway, keep it up. Mapmaking is hard work.