New map #Update

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Hi NI,

I tried to make a map but it was very difficult :/  It was my first time and I did my best. Its not finished yet but I wanted to ask you guys for some good advice or things that I can change or I can make better.

No rude reactions pls.

First version

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Update 1:

I made the gap a bit more to the right and added some stuff. Let me know what you think and tell me what can be done better! ( More screenshots!! )

Second version

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Update 2:

Ive made the map a bit bigger added some stuff and placed the barriers. Let me know what you think!

3rd version:

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