21-12-2011, 12:51 PM
Can't wait to see your next iteration. Hopefully I'll be awake to test it with you guys.
I think your backstory would be better if you changed the map a bit. With the bridge currently connected between two mountains, I am reminded of the one found in Shadow of the Colossus. Say the bridge goes across a deep ravine on the border at some forests edge -- the explanation for the bridges width would be that it was used eons ago during more peaceful times for commerce, and during times of war, for invasion. For this to work, you'd have to add another gate at the back of the keep, of course. In any case, these are my suggestions; I hope you take them into consideration.
I think your backstory would be better if you changed the map a bit. With the bridge currently connected between two mountains, I am reminded of the one found in Shadow of the Colossus. Say the bridge goes across a deep ravine on the border at some forests edge -- the explanation for the bridges width would be that it was used eons ago during more peaceful times for commerce, and during times of war, for invasion. For this to work, you'd have to add another gate at the back of the keep, of course. In any case, these are my suggestions; I hope you take them into consideration.
ba da bing ba da BAN! -Hypernoma