21-12-2011, 01:12 PM
(21-12-2011, 12:51 PM)clickeverywhere link Wrote: Can't wait to see your next iteration. Hopefully I'll be awake to test it with you guys.Due to the fact that I am vering from my main idea. Call it artistic inspiration or randomness. I am changing the map quiet a bit from the originol idea as you can see. I will change the back storie as soon as me and Horns finish the map!
I think your backstory would be better if you changed the map a bit. With the bridge currently connected between two mountains, I am reminded of the one found in Shadow of the Colossus. Say the bridge goes across a deep ravine on the border at some forests edge -- the explanation for the bridges width would be that it was used eons ago during more peaceful times for commerce, and during times of war, for invasion. For this to work, you'd have to add another gate at the back of the keep, of course. In any case, these are my suggestions; I hope you take them into consideration.