16-12-2012, 09:56 AM
Just for future reference, Art2X, going up and posting that everything someone did is bad and not providing any feedback on how to improve will always seem rude :I
Terath, this is a great start and you've grown a lot since your first models..... y'know, the ones that we shouldn't ever talk about XD However, to be honest, there are a few things you could do that would greatly improve the quality of these models.
1. The actual model for the Gold Bolts is nice, now you just need a better texture for them and possibly a model for them when they are all together in a neat little back on your hip.
2. The swords need more curves, man! The blade of the Quicksilver is nice, but the curve on Credulity really takes away from the overall model. The inward curving would make it a weak weapon that would bend and/or break easily. If it were a smaller overall curve it would probably look a bit better. You could also possibly make the curve start further down the sword. Where it is now just looks awkward. A really thin 2h weapon isn't the most reliable weapon in the world.
3. Credence is a nice looking sword overall, but I feel like it would look even better if you lengthened the blade and made IT a 2h or bastard sword instead. The way it is now, it seems too thick and compact.
4. Audacity is... well.. audacious. It is a short, thick, and blunt little sword and to be honest I like it.
5. Sacrosanct... I love it. Now it just needs some pretty textures :3
Oh my... It seems Art2X has tricked me into giving an actual review on this... XD
Terath, this is a great start and you've grown a lot since your first models..... y'know, the ones that we shouldn't ever talk about XD However, to be honest, there are a few things you could do that would greatly improve the quality of these models.
1. The actual model for the Gold Bolts is nice, now you just need a better texture for them and possibly a model for them when they are all together in a neat little back on your hip.
2. The swords need more curves, man! The blade of the Quicksilver is nice, but the curve on Credulity really takes away from the overall model. The inward curving would make it a weak weapon that would bend and/or break easily. If it were a smaller overall curve it would probably look a bit better. You could also possibly make the curve start further down the sword. Where it is now just looks awkward. A really thin 2h weapon isn't the most reliable weapon in the world.
3. Credence is a nice looking sword overall, but I feel like it would look even better if you lengthened the blade and made IT a 2h or bastard sword instead. The way it is now, it seems too thick and compact.
4. Audacity is... well.. audacious. It is a short, thick, and blunt little sword and to be honest I like it.
5. Sacrosanct... I love it. Now it just needs some pretty textures :3
Oh my... It seems Art2X has tricked me into giving an actual review on this... XD