22-08-2013, 11:43 PM
(22-08-2013, 01:07 PM)Slayer link Wrote: I definitely like your trailer genf, i love the character set up, i love the music, i love how you have the footsteps going at the sound of the drums around the start, with the peaceful view of swadia, however some things that I don't like:
1) The sudden ending where the berserker randomly yells and you have an NI title, then it sort of feels that the trailer actually starts, hope you understand. not really ???
2) How at the end when you get hit by the axe, the music doesn't stop, it NEEDS to stop when you die, it just needs to. already noticed. I gonna change it
3) Try to add more about the web page, all I saw was having 3 different types of crafting, people aren't really going to understand choose a blacksmith/alchemist etc, they don't even know there's a website and how it has a LARGE relevance to the game. I'm thinking about it but I dont know how to properly introduce it
4) Attempt to show a tiny snippet of the forum to show there is a trading scheme. same problem then point 3.
Clip suggestion:
What I always thought would be cool would be a sniper shooting a barrel on the other side of the map in a large group of nords on a large map such as mountain pass, follow the arrow as it leaves the bow in reverse, slowly turn the camera before impacting the barrel, put it in slow motion and put your own flying arrow sound to it + explosion. I also had this idea but a bit complicated to do it.
^^ I liked that idea from the start, but i'm just throwing suggestions at you.
Great trailer! Keep it up.
Thank you for your suggestions. I need it.