16-02-2015, 11:22 AM
Ha!
A man of many talents
I didn't know you make music O.O.
That's pretty good the song. If I could suggest anything concerning the song dynamics, I'd try to keep verses shorter. The refrain is great. An off-tempo bridge at ca. 2/3 would make it flow better to introduce a one more refrain run for the finale.
Refering to C'e Crisi, I'd say it calls for a brace (it begins with like an interview fragment, it might end with the same, would be cool).
Were you thinking of using a chorus as counterpoint in your songs? The way they flow seems to require some tempo differentiation, you might try to take a look at a suite and maybe find some inspiration... You guys definitly have this in you, though a bit of composition theory could do some help IMHO.
Are there lyrics available somewhere? My Italian not good enough to understand it from hearing...
A man of many talents
I didn't know you make music O.O. That's pretty good the song. If I could suggest anything concerning the song dynamics, I'd try to keep verses shorter. The refrain is great. An off-tempo bridge at ca. 2/3 would make it flow better to introduce a one more refrain run for the finale.
Refering to C'e Crisi, I'd say it calls for a brace (it begins with like an interview fragment, it might end with the same, would be cool).
Were you thinking of using a chorus as counterpoint in your songs? The way they flow seems to require some tempo differentiation, you might try to take a look at a suite and maybe find some inspiration... You guys definitly have this in you, though a bit of composition theory could do some help IMHO.
Are there lyrics available somewhere? My Italian not good enough to understand it from hearing...